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Do the people ever mention/that in the 21st century there are racial tensions/Be careful when you are wishing/and take a look at your position/you got a family and ain't in need of more money/why ask for more when you aren't broker than al bundy/You want to become stronger physically/ i want to be smarter and better lyrically/Your body is obviously strong/but facing mentally terror you have trained too wrong/In a fight even with your strength you could be destroyed/Being dumb but strong doesn't get you employed/ A man is one who is in control of his actions/Throwing away your weapon could be a brand new attraction/Why not be a Scholar that doesn't get judged by his or hers skin color/Reject the racist philosophy/Enlighten me with your methodology/When rapping you have to have some form of knowledge/ You can be street smart or have been to college/Better be careful with the wrong affiliations/They might be the ones that will cause your extermination/But only will really know/How you will die and how your life will go/Who has got a free will?/Everybody has so choose not to kill/Why waste a life that God sent as a present/How dare you you retarded peasant/Don't get me started it will be too pleasant/Forget the status quo homie you know? /Do your own thang forget everybody else/ You are the only one who can help/ So do it yourself/It ain't that hard/ Why not start?/And prove that you never were a retard